An embarrassing experience - Draft one
I had an embarrasing experience when I was 14. One day, on my way to the cram school, I saw a man and a baby. They are similar to my teacher and his
child, so I called them very loudly on the street. But after they turned to me, I
found he was not my teacher. After that, I rode the bicycle very fast. It was really embarrassing, because there were also some people walking on that street. Now I don't call people loudly on the road, unless I am very sure who he
is. I don't want to make the same mistake again.

8 Comments:
I am very sure who they are 吧
前面是people
It should be"There were similar to...".
But after* they turned to me, I
found he was not my teacher. After that*, I rode the bicycle very fast.
some suggestions:
*1 after 改成 when 我覺得好一點
*2 改成 the incident 呃 感覺比較高級
= =+ 又可以充字數 哈哈哈
我的意見跟前幾個差不多耶!!被講光了
太晚來了
沒什麼可改
very funny..
my opinion is similar to them..
I had an embarrasing experience when I was 14.
上句的"embarrassing"拼錯了。
大概就這樣了吧。
It seems no problem.
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