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Wednesday, January 17, 2007

Learning English - Draft one

Learning English is very helpful. When you in your free time, you may want to do something for fun. Listening to English songs and watching English movie or reading English movie can be the good choices. Because it can improve your English skills, someday, when you realize you can know the content of the movies, the novels, or the songs, you will feel very happy and have the sense of achievement. After you graduate from school, you may want to find great jobs. If you can speak English well, you can have higher opportunities to be employed by companies. In the daily life, you may have chances to go to travel, you can use English to talk to foreigners, or if you get lost in the foreign countries, you also can use English to ask people. All in all, English can be very useful in every place.

3 Comments:

Blogger Sally Sun said...

Listening to English songs and watching English movies or reading English books can be the good..

Because it can improve your English....
這裡的because其原因在上句应寫

Listening to English songs and watching English movies or reading English books can be the good choices because it can...

may have chances to go to travel, you can use 我是建議

may have chances to go to travel, and you can use

you also can use English to
you can also use...

3:14 AM  
Blogger 薪雯 said...

In the daily life, you may have chances to go to travel, you can use English to talk to foreigners, or if you get lost in the foreign countries, you also can use English to ask people.感覺句子太冗長了,或許可以分開來寫

5:42 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

"If you can speak English well, you can have higher ..."
我覺得要用will
If you speak English well, you will have heigher...

2:35 AM  

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