Autobiogrophy-1-Draft one
My name is Cai-Wei, Lin. I was born in 1990 in Tainan city. There are five people in my family. My father is a kind person. He is a manager in his company, and often stays in China. My mother is a housewife, though she only graduated from junior high school, she teaches me and gives me a lot. One of my younger brothers studies in third grade in junior high school. He is very moody, and he likes to play computer games very much. The other is studying in sixth grade in elementary school. He is very energetic. The last member in my family is me. I am an easygoing and optimistic girl. I study in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. I am very glad to live in such a harmonious family; I love my family very much.
I like to watch Japanese dramas and listen to Japanese songs. Owing to that, I can learn Japanese. I also like to surf the net in my leisure time. Because of that, I can get the new information fast.

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in third grade
in the third..
in the sixth..
嗯如果要寫可不可以淨量不要寫聽音樂.上網阿
因為教授不ㄧ定對那個有興趣.....金龍說的
Well,I think maybe you can express the benefits which you can get from your habits,it will be better.
序數前加個the
也許可以再多寫一些
興趣對你的影響
I can learn Japanese.
可以再多寫一點 說不只日文還有他的文化!!
Because of that, I can get the new information "fast".
1形容移動或動作一直保持在很快速的情況下,
應該用fast
2如果是指某件事情在很短的時間內完成,
就要用quick
EX1 The car is fast!
2 My watch is five minutes fast!
3 I had a quick breakfast and went to school.
Learning Japanese is not easy.
I think maybe you can describe more about how you learn Japanese on this part.
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