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Wednesday, May 02, 2007

Autobiography-2 Draft1

After the Joint Entrance Examination of Senior High Schools, I chose to enter a vocational school and majored in Department of Applied Foreign Language. In the second year of my school life, I joined the Japanese club, and learned a lot from it. Because I didn’t like to do exercise, I didn’t choose the sports club. Even though I was studying in elementary school, when I was a fifth grade student, I joined the needlework club; I enjoyed sewing dolls very much. In my senior high school life, we have many tests, like English, Japanese, computer, typing, etc. Though we don’t know whether we can pass it or not, I think it will be my memories in my life.
I decide to join the department of foreign languages, because I think to learn foreign languages well is very essential, it will be very useful in the future. From now on, I will improve my language skills, and do my best do learn it well.

5 Comments:

Blogger 薪雯 said...

do exercise應該要寫take exercise,do exercise不是做運動的意思

8:14 PM  
Blogger Penny said...

妳第三段要不要先寫國小再寫國中.高中啊!\
順序有點錯亂呢!
I think to learn foreign languages well is very essential,

I think that learning foreing language well is very essential.

8:15 PM  
Blogger Estella said...

恩 順序有點亂

不愛做運動那句
應該可以不用寫出來= =

8:19 PM  
Blogger Debie said...

" Because I didn’t like to do exercise, I didn’t choose the sports club."should not be written.
By the way, the order seems a little messy.

8:23 PM  
Blogger Sally Sun said...

because I think to learn foreign languages well is very
怪怪的
I will improve my language skills, and do my best do learn it well我會用
I will try harder to improve..

and do my best do learn it well寫錯了吧

Even though I was studying in elementary school, when I was a fifth grade student, I joined the needlework club; I enjoyed sewing dolls very much.這句有點不搭

8:29 PM  

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