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Wednesday, June 20, 2007

Making decisions-Draft two

Growing up means making my own decisions. I think I am old enough to be myself, and should be more independent. When we were younger babies, my parents had to make the decisions for us, but now, we are near 18 years old, therefore, we have to learn how to make the best decisions by ourselves and never make our parents feel worried about us.

The hardest decision that I ever made was choosing to enter the senior high school or the vocational senior high school. When I was receiving my report card after the BCT, my grade was high enough to enter a middle high school, but I didn’t want to learn the history, geography, and biology, so I wanted to choose the vocational senior high school. However, if I didn’t choose the senior high school, I might be not to get into a good college. When I asked my mom which school I should choose, she just told me to choose which I like and not to regret. Finally, I chose to get into the Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school because I didn’t really like those subjects. Now, I am very glad that I chose this school on that time, and I think I will never have any regret at that decisions I have ever decided.

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Blogger gimliong said...

Growing up means making own decisions. I think if we are old enough, they should be more independent. When we were younger babies, our parents had to make the decisions for us, but now, we are near 18 years old. Therefore, we have to learn how to make the best decisions by ourselves and never make our parents feel worried about us.

The hardest decision that I ever made was choosing to enter the senior high school or the vocational senior high school. When I received my report card after the BCT, my grade was high enough to enter a middle high school, but I didn’t want to learn history, geography, and biology, so I wanted to choose a vocational senior high school. However, if I didn’t choose the senior high school, I might be not able to get into a good college. When I asked my mom which school I should choose, she just told me to choose which I like and not to regret. Finally, I chose to get into the Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High school because I didn’t really like those subjects. Now, I am very glad that I chose this school at that time, and I think I will never have any regret on that decisions I have ever decided.




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