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Sunday, December 30, 2007

Learning Japanese-Draft one

Learning Japanese well is important to me. First of all, in my leisure time, I like to watch Japanese drama, and I also have some favorite Japanese singers. When I watch the TV shows or listen to their songs, I desire to know the meaning of what they say and the meaning of the lyrics. In order to the reason, I want to learn Japanese well. Secondly, I like Japan very much, my family also have the same feeling of mine. We all dream that one day we can go to Japan for a trip, by learn the language well, I think I can know more about their culture and custom in-depth. Thirdly and the most important reason, I want to study aboard in Japan after I graduate from college, therefore, I have to learn the language of this country, so that I can know more about how to live with the local people and have good relationship with my neighbors.
According to these reasons, learning Japanese well is very important to me.

2 Comments:

Blogger Debie said...

"In order to the reason"should be"because of the reason.

"by learn... "should be "by learning..."

8:40 PM  
Blogger Sally Sun said...

In order to the reason, I want to learn Japanese well.
這句有點不通順
in order to 加子句
I like Japan very much,and my family also have the same feeling as mine.

one day we can go to Japan for a trip我覺得可用
one day we can take a trip to Japan

cultural 拼錯..

Good!

6:32 AM  

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