Computers-draft one

The computer is the most influential invention of the twentieth century. They have already been widely used in our daily life. With it, we can listen to music, watch the latest movie, and play the online games, and so on. We can use it to make friends, such as get into the chat room, send the e-mail, or talk on the MSN. It can help somebody who are introversion to make more friends. Besides, through the computer network, we can get the new information, and do the homework quickly. Because of that, we can have more time to do other things which we want to do. We also can buy some things on the internet.
Though it is very convenient, it may harm our health. First, if we look at the computer for a long time, our eyesight may be injured. Second, the electromagnetic wave is not good for our body. Furthermore, person and person will become distant. After that, to sit on the chair to play computer for a long time, it may account us become fatter and fatter. Even if the computer have a lot of advantages, we may not use it too long, or it will make us become unhealthy.

Autobiography-2 Draft2

When I was a fifth grade student in elementary school, I joined the needlework club; I often got better grades than other students in my class. I enjoyed sewing dolls very much. After the Joint Entrance Examination of Senior High Schools, I chose to enter a vocational school and majored in Department of Applied Foreign Language. In the second year of my school life, I joined the Japanese club, and learned a lot from it, and I also get the Japanese certificate in 2007. In my senior high school life, we have many tests, like English, Japanese, computer, typing, etc. Though we don’t know whether we can pass it or not, I think it will be my memories in my life.

I decide to join the department of foreign languages, because I think to learn foreign languages well is very essential, it will be very useful in the future. From now on, I will try harder to improve my language skills to get more certificates. I will do my best.

Autobiography-2 Draft1

After the Joint Entrance Examination of Senior High Schools, I chose to enter a vocational school and majored in Department of Applied Foreign Language. In the second year of my school life, I joined the Japanese club, and learned a lot from it. Because I didn’t like to do exercise, I didn’t choose the sports club. Even though I was studying in elementary school, when I was a fifth grade student, I joined the needlework club; I enjoyed sewing dolls very much. In my senior high school life, we have many tests, like English, Japanese, computer, typing, etc. Though we don’t know whether we can pass it or not, I think it will be my memories in my life.
I decide to join the department of foreign languages, because I think to learn foreign languages well is very essential, it will be very useful in the future. From now on, I will improve my language skills, and do my best do learn it well.