Learning English - Draft two

Learning English is very helpful. When you have free time, you may want to do something for fun. Listening to English songs and watching English movie or reading English movie can be the good choices, because it can improve your English skills, someday, when you realize you can know the content of the movies, the novels, or the songs, you will feel very happy and have the sense of achievement. After you graduate from school, you may want to find great jobs. If you can speak English well, you will have higher opportunities to be employed by companies. In the daily life, you may have chances to go to travel, you can use English to talk to foreigners, or if you get lost in the foreign countries, you also can use English to ask people. All in all, English can be very useful in every place.

Learning English - Draft one

Learning English is very helpful. When you in your free time, you may want to do something for fun. Listening to English songs and watching English movie or reading English movie can be the good choices. Because it can improve your English skills, someday, when you realize you can know the content of the movies, the novels, or the songs, you will feel very happy and have the sense of achievement. After you graduate from school, you may want to find great jobs. If you can speak English well, you can have higher opportunities to be employed by companies. In the daily life, you may have chances to go to travel, you can use English to talk to foreigners, or if you get lost in the foreign countries, you also can use English to ask people. All in all, English can be very useful in every place.

My Bedroom-Draft Two

My bedroom is a small place. When you walk in my room, you 'll see the closet first. It's a big closet. I put all my clothes in it. On the left hand of the wall is my bed, it's also a small bed, but it's really comfortable. There is a desk beside my bed. There are many books on it. The right wall is lined with my two cabinets. One of them is filled with my dolls, like Hello Kitty, Snoopy, and Teddy Bear. Another is my bookcase. I put my old textbooks and novels there. And on the top of the wall are three posters. They are my favorite singers' pictures. In the middle of the room is a carpet which is my birthday present. Although this is a small room, I like it very much.

My Bedroom-Draft One

My bedroom is a small place. When you walk in the door, you 'll see the closet first. It's a big closet. I put all my close in it. On the left wall is my bed, it's also a small bed, but it's really comfortable. There is a desk beside my bed. There are many books on it. The right wall is lined my two cabinets. One of them is filled with my dolls, like Hello Kitty, Snoopy, and Teddy Bear. Another is my bookcase. I put my old textbooks and novels there. And on the top of the wall are three posters. They are my favorite singers' pictures. In the middle of the room is a carpet which is my birthday present. Although this is a small room, I like it very much.

An embarrassing experience - Draft two

I had an embarrasing experience when I was 14. One day, on my way to the cram school, I saw a man and a baby. They were similar to my teacher and his child, so I called them very loudly on the street. But when they turned to me, I found he was not my teacher. After the incident, I rode the bicycle very fast. It was really embarrassing, because there were also some people walking on that street. Now I don't call people loudly on the road, unless I am very sure who they are. I don't want to make the same mistake again.