Translation-Draft Two

TV Program
Choosing the programs carefully is very important. Though the television is the most important channel which provides the information and the entertainment, it may have some disadvantages. Some programs that fill with violence and lust have bad influence on teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV may also hurt our eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the programs which are helpful to our bodies and mind. The most valuable thing is not to be a couch potato.
The Computers
The computers play an important role in our daily life; they can help students hand in homework quickly, and they also help people deliver the information in time, as long as you turn on the computers, you surely fall in love with them. However, you are sure to remind yourself, not to sit in front of the computers for a long time; most parents do not like children depend on computers; especially the discussion of the Bulletin Board System is wasting much time.

Translation-Draft One

TV Program
Choosing the programs carefully is very important. Though the television is the most important channel which provides the information and the entertainment, it may have some disadvantages. Some programs that fill with violence and lust have bad influence for teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV may also hurt our eyesight. Therefore, we should choose the programs which are helpful to our bodies and mind. The most important thing is not to be a couch potato.
The Computers
The computers play an important role in our daily life; they can help students hand in homework quickly, and they also help people deliver the information in time, as long as you turn on the computers, you surely fall in love with them. However, you are sure to remind yourself, not to sit in front of the computers for a long time; most parents do not like children depend on computers, especially the discussion of the Bulletin Board System is very wasting time.

Cinderlla's Valentine's Day-Draft two

Today is Valentine’s Day, Cinderella’s boyfriend, Brian, makes a phone call to her in the morning. She is very happy to hear his voice, because she thinks that he won’t forget this important day of couples, but she is wrong. A few minutes later, Brian tells her that he wants to break up with her. Cinderella is very shock and she doesn’t want to believe it. She starts to cry; Brian feels very nervous. Then she asks him the reason. He tells her that he likes boys, not girls. He also feels very sorry to her. At the same time, Cinderella cries much louder, because she conceives a child, and the baby’s father is Brian. She is too sad to say any words. What a poor girl she is.

Cinderella's Valentine's Day-Draft one

On Valentine’s Day, Cinderella’s boyfriend, Bryan, makes a phone call to her in the morning. She is very happy to hear his voice, because she thinks that he doesn’t forget this important day of couples, but she is wrong. A few minutes later, Brian tells her that he wants to break up with her. Cinderella is very shock and she doesn’t want to believe it. She starts to cry; she also asks him the reason. Brian tells her that he likes boy, not girl. He also feels very sorry to her. A t the same time, Cinderella cries much louder, because she conceives a child, and the kid’s father is Brian. She is too sad to speak now. What a poor girl she is.

Tips of staying healthy.-Draft Two

Staying healthy is really an important thing for our life. There are some tips of staying healthy. First of all, do exercise regularly. To do that, you will have a strong body, and the resistance will become higher. Second, to have enough sleep, thus you will feel very energetic when you do everything. Finally, stay in a good mood. It is also the most important one. Because good mood can make you feel happy, you always feel that, some diseases will keep away from you. All in all, if you are not health, you can’t do anything well.

Diary

Today is the Chinese New Year’s Eve. In the evening, we have a family reunion in my house. There are so many people here, and we have hot pot for dinner. After dinner, we get the red envelopes, but my mom all take it away. Finally, I only get 1500 dollars. After that, my uncle, cousin, brother and I play cards. I am the loser, so I have to pay more than 500 dollars for them. Tonight is a wonderful night, because I meet many relations whom I haven't seen for a long time, it was really happy.